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When life began for me
So long ago
You gave me a thread
To hold
Can’t say now it’s strong
I know
It’s breaking slowly

I’m hanging at the bottom
Waiting for a motive
To climb back up
And keep on going

It was everything to me
Just like you
To see it wearing out
I knew
One day it would break
Like you

Your hand holds my thread
Looking up I see you
Waiting for a motive
To let me go
:iconpsychobearluvsfatkid:

Author's Comments

I've been listening to some very beautifully written music that influenced me to write this. I can't say I have a motive to write this...I just did.

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:icontehcrab:
One word: Beautiful.

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:boing: Boing. :boing:
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-Dezerya- Amazing! It seems to have a different flow then your other poetry. I quite enjoyed it.
-Samantha- I agree with crab! Beautiful!
-Maria- I like string! ^nn^
-Dezerya&Samantha- ^= =^ ^= =^

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:3
:iconpsychobearluvsfatkid:
THAAAAAAAAAAAANKS.

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"Chowder, what have you done?! Now the animators have to draw all this fire."
:iconpsychobearluvsfatkid:
thats REAL critical of you. >.<;

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"Chowder, what have you done?! Now the animators have to draw all this fire."
:iconargoth-demonsreign:
Wonderfully done Jess. I love this one. Quite beautiful.

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:iconpsychobearluvsfatkid:
thanks paul

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"Chowder, what have you done?! Now the animators have to draw all this fire."
:iconpsychobearluvsfatkid:
I thought it was good the moment i read it after i wrote it. weird.

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"Chowder, what have you done?! Now the animators have to draw all this fire."
:iconrose-of-sharyn:
I loved this since when you showed it to me before. It should be a song!! ( > < )/)

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:iconpsychobearluvsfatkid:
o.o you think im Ms. Music don't chya....=.=

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"Chowder, what have you done?! Now the animators have to draw all this fire."

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